Here is a poem I “Jotted” down one night at like…one in the morning I think. Hope you like.
How is it that I feel this way?
My eyes sting with tears
My heart is breaking again.
The memories return,
Recreating the feelings I thought
Were gone.
Just like you.
You are just a person in my mind
A blonde who took up half my heart
Taking it with you
When you left
You are only a part of
My past.
Thought everything about it was moving, except the "blonde" part. Kinda took away... That's just me, though.
ReplyDeleteIs it about a lost love? That's what it seems like.
What should it be??? If not blonde?
ReplyDeleteWell... it shouldn't be anything gender-related (guy, boy, girl, etc.) because that'll take away the openness to all different people.
ReplyDeleteMaybe... individual? Nah...
Soul? Identity?
..Sorry, should've had something in mind when I wrote that....
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ReplyDeleteThanks for the help! (again)
ReplyDeleteDid you like the "Just like you" in the center.